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  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: An Excerpt from Shrive

    Hello, dahling! :D Off we go. ;) So, first off. Character impressions. Layra: I really like her. Especially her and Ezra together. Ezra: So far he's my favorite character. And, ...

    Feb 4, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Incisive Coalition

    Hi, Penguin, dear. First, if you need any clarification or can't read my handwriting, please tell me. Second, off we go. ;) One thing I would suggest is splitting up ...

    Feb 2, 2010
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Robins

    Hi, Jasmine honey. So, number one, if you can't understand or decipher my hand writing, please tell me. Number two, off we go. ;) Hope this helps, Cal.

    Feb 2, 2010
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: heart dissection

    Kylan, dahling! Off we go. ;) You know the drill by now. If there is something you cannot decipher from my handwriting, please tell me. :D The imagery in this ...

    Feb 2, 2010
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: impression #2: les pĂȘches (peaches)

    Kylan, dear. Off we go. ;) You know the drill by now. If there is something you cannot decipher from my handwriting, please tell me. :D 1. Stanza Length Where ...

    Feb 2, 2010
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: impression #1: les gens de la ville (cityfolk)

    Kylan, dear. Off we go. ;) You know the drill by now. If there is something you cannot decipher from my handwriting, please tell me. :D So, I love the ...

    Feb 2, 2010
  • Article / Essay » Review, General Re: Good spy fic

    Two cents. Erm, modern spy. I second what Master_Yoda said. Also, anything by Lawrence Block, Graham Greene's The Human Factor and anything by John Le Carre (particularly The Spy Who ...

    Apr 26, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: Black Stars Prologue (R&R please!)

    Hello, honey.Since this is the first time I've critiqued anything of yours, there is probably two things you should know: one, if you have any questions, ask them; two, if ...

    Apr 6, 2009
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Notes

    Hey, honey! Since this is, I think, the first time I've critiqued anything of yours, there is probably two things you should know: one, if you have any questions, ask ...

    Apr 6, 2009
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Toby's Lunch

    Hey, Linds! Since this is, I think, the first time I've critiqued anything of yours, there is probably two things you should know: one, if you have any questions, ask ...

    Apr 6, 2009
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Cold Promise (fourth and final installment)

    Hello, satina. Since this is the first time I've critiqued anything of yours, there is probably two things you should know: one, if you have any questions, ask them; two, ...

    Apr 6, 2009
  • Short Story » General, General Re: A Tracing of Angels

    Hello, again, honey. You know the drill. Not one of your best, but I did enjoy the description of everyday events; it makes the guy that much more creepy. Also, ...

    Apr 6, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Maharaj The Magician [edited]

    Hey, honey. You know the drill. ;) MAGIC TRICKS I love the descriptions of the magician. :D LITTLE ORPHAN OLIVER More, please? I quite like what is there at the ...

    Apr 6, 2009
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, General Re: Stars, pt. 1

    Hey, honey. Look, I finally scanned stuff in. If something is unclear or my handwriting is illegible please tell me. WATERBOARDING IN SCI-FI LAND How is it the worst torture? ...

    Apr 6, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Vicissitudes--1. Alice

    Hello, dear. Since this is the first time I've critiqued anything of yours, there is probably two things you should know: one, if you have any questions, ask them; two, ...

    Apr 6, 2009


Doubt thou the stars are fire, doubt that the sun doth move. Doubt truth to be a liar, but never doubt I love.
— "Hamlet," William Shakespeare