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Re: An Excerpt from Shrive
Hello, dahling! :D Off we go. ;) So, first off. Character impressions. Layra: I really like her. Especially her and Ezra together. Ezra: So far he's my favorite character. And, ...
Feb 4, 2010 -
Re: Incisive Coalition
Hi, Penguin, dear. First, if you need any clarification or can't read my handwriting, please tell me. Second, off we go. ;) One thing I would suggest is splitting up ...
Feb 2, 2010 -
Re: Robins
Hi, Jasmine honey. So, number one, if you can't understand or decipher my hand writing, please tell me. Number two, off we go. ;) Hope this helps, Cal.
Feb 2, 2010 -
Re: heart dissection
Kylan, dahling! Off we go. ;) You know the drill by now. If there is something you cannot decipher from my handwriting, please tell me. :D The imagery in this ...
Feb 2, 2010 -
Re: impression #2: les pĂȘches (peaches)
Kylan, dear. Off we go. ;) You know the drill by now. If there is something you cannot decipher from my handwriting, please tell me. :D 1. Stanza Length Where ...
Feb 2, 2010 -
Re: impression #1: les gens de la ville (cityfolk)
Kylan, dear. Off we go. ;) You know the drill by now. If there is something you cannot decipher from my handwriting, please tell me. :D So, I love the ...
Feb 2, 2010 -
Re: Good spy fic
Two cents. Erm, modern spy. I second what Master_Yoda said. Also, anything by Lawrence Block, Graham Greene's The Human Factor and anything by John Le Carre (particularly The Spy Who ...
Apr 26, 2009 -
Re: Black Stars Prologue (R&R please!)
Hello, honey.Since this is the first time I've critiqued anything of yours, there is probably two things you should know: one, if you have any questions, ask them; two, if ...
Apr 6, 2009 -
Re: Notes
Hey, honey! Since this is, I think, the first time I've critiqued anything of yours, there is probably two things you should know: one, if you have any questions, ask ...
Apr 6, 2009 -
Re: Toby's Lunch
Hey, Linds! Since this is, I think, the first time I've critiqued anything of yours, there is probably two things you should know: one, if you have any questions, ask ...
Apr 6, 2009 -
Re: Cold Promise (fourth and final installment)
Hello, satina. Since this is the first time I've critiqued anything of yours, there is probably two things you should know: one, if you have any questions, ask them; two, ...
Apr 6, 2009 -
Re: A Tracing of Angels
Hello, again, honey. You know the drill. Not one of your best, but I did enjoy the description of everyday events; it makes the guy that much more creepy. Also, ...
Apr 6, 2009 -
Re: Maharaj The Magician [edited]
Hey, honey. You know the drill. ;) MAGIC TRICKS I love the descriptions of the magician. :D LITTLE ORPHAN OLIVER More, please? I quite like what is there at the ...
Apr 6, 2009 -
Re: Stars, pt. 1
Hey, honey. Look, I finally scanned stuff in. If something is unclear or my handwriting is illegible please tell me. WATERBOARDING IN SCI-FI LAND How is it the worst torture? ...
Apr 6, 2009 -
Re: Vicissitudes--1. Alice
Hello, dear. Since this is the first time I've critiqued anything of yours, there is probably two things you should know: one, if you have any questions, ask them; two, ...
Apr 6, 2009
